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Post by Vincent on Jul 24, 2010 17:10:22 GMT -5
OK, overall the application is pretty good, but there are a couple of small things for you to fix before I can approve it. First of all is the personality. I understand that he can change the way he acts due to being a con-man, but we need to know what his true personality is, how he acts when he's being himself and what personality traits (strengths, weaknesses, and habits e.t.c.) he possesses when not on a job. Develop it a bit, possibly explaining the intricacies of his sociopathy. Second of all, the history is rather vague; add some small details so we know more about him. Who is Mukki? What does he/she do? How did he meet and join this gang? Some details would help people understand your character by seeing his history with a little more detail. Fix those up and you'll be good to go, .
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Post by Vincent on Jul 25, 2010 15:13:58 GMT -5
Nicely done. Go and have fun, . Approved!
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Post by Tifa Lockhart on Sept 12, 2010 20:34:13 GMT -5
Good question, wish I knew the answer to that one myself. Maybe Seph or Vince or Aer/Yuf can shed some light on a timeline.
PS - Great character outline btw. That's quite impressive
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Post by Vincent on Sept 13, 2010 10:42:53 GMT -5
Well, I'm not exactly sure but it's between 2 and 5 years post DoC. Next time I talk to Seph I'll make sure to ask for ya.
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