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Post by Cloud Strife on Jun 24, 2011 7:35:51 GMT -5
The only minutely nit-picky thing I have to criticize about this is that while I get the gyst of what you mean through saying his alignment is good, that section is also your chance to say whether or not he's affiliated with any of the major groups on Gaea, IE Deepground, AVALANCE, ShinRa, etc. If you don't want him to be working for or even to have met any of the canon characters, you're more than welcome to fill the slot with "Unaffiliated" just to clarify that he's a loner.
At any rate, once that minor issue is cleared up I have no qualms about approving this character for use on the board. ^^ He looks like a solid character and I look forward to seeing what you decide to do with him once the stuff hits the fan in our little plotline. XD
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Post by fehnix on Jun 24, 2011 7:45:13 GMT -5
I fixed the problem - however I never saw the orange haired part. I did see Orange eyed instead
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Post by Cloud Strife on Jun 24, 2011 7:46:45 GMT -5
Yeah, I amended that bit of my post quickly in the hopes that you wouldn't see it. XD My speed reading caught up to me and made me misread a word, my mistake.
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Post by fehnix on Jun 24, 2011 7:50:57 GMT -5
Like his "actual" name I can be there before you know it ^^
D'louc's full meaning is
"The Firey Cloud with little or no regard of events"
So it works though?
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Post by Cloud Strife on Jun 24, 2011 7:53:56 GMT -5
That sounds almost like Strifey's polar opposite... He's a brooder. XP
It certainly gets my seal of approval. We'll wait for a day or two to see if anyone else has something to say about it, then it should be migrated to the Approved Bios board and you're welcome to jump in where you see fit.
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Post by Yuffie Kisaragi on Jun 24, 2011 10:17:51 GMT -5
Looks good. Feel free to move it.
...Or I guess I could do it...
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